Preperation + Development: My Short film so far

After audience feedback on my short film so far, the consensus appeared to be that i needed to do some extra footage of actions that match the words of the poem. For example shot of the girl making a scrapbook of memories. Also they gave me the idea to end the short film with a similar series of that show the scrapbook being made, a letter being written and a girl posting the letter however all in rewind almost as if it is being undone.